Johns parents left on a vacation for the weekend. John thought.
"I should throw a huge party where every kid in town is invited." John called all of his friends and told them to come to his party at 9 o'clock on Friday night just after his parents would leave. When John finished calling all of his friends his mom came in and said that they weren't leaving until 9:30. John asked his mom why. Johns mom said.
"Our plane has been delayed a half hour." John panicked and looked at the clock it was 9:20. He tried calling his friends back but it was too late they were already on there way over to his house. Just then he heard the door bell. he looked out the window and saw that it was 100 of his friends. When his mom answered the door she asked them all.
"What are you doing here?" One of the kids said that they were here for the party. She let them in and went to talk to John. After a 20 minute argument John made a deal with his mom. The deal was that John could still have the party but his mom was allowed to join. Johns mom was the best break dancer at the party. When the party was over and all the kids left Johns house was destroyed.
Good story but you should switch the placing of 'he said'/'she said' a bit to have some variety.
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