"Almost alone at last" Andreas was seven hours away from the greatest night of his life. His parents were leaving for Las Vegas and Andreas was going to throw the biggest party anyone at Chicago Heights high school has ever known.
Andreas was sitting in his desk in history class his professor was lecturing the class on Napoleon's greatest achievements, but Andreas wasn't listening. he was anxiously tapping his foot watching the seconds slowly tick away on the clock.
"Come on, come on just a minute and a half till the end of the day," he whispered to himself. Andreas finally had his chance at throwing a party. His family has a history of throwing the best parties and Andreas wasn't going to let that reputation end with him. The bell finally rang and Andreas raced out of the room and to the main gate.
"PARTY AT MY HOUSE!!!" Yelled Andreas. everyone cheered because they have heard from their parents that Andreas's father had the best parties.
Andreas made it to his just before his parents were about to leave
"Now you be good honey," said his mother, "and no friends over hear and bed by a decent time, okay."
"Okay mom good-bye." Replied Andreas
"Bye sweetie," said his mother while she hopped into the taxi with Andreas's father. Andreas waved good-bye as the taxi drove away.
"And now the party begins," said Andreas with a large grin on his face.
I liked the story but you forgot 1 capital on the word everyone in the fourth paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood story Devo but remember capitals
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