Thursday, January 12, 2012

A sad Story about a guy

" i knew you'd come,"he sighed. he didn't sound happy to see me.


 I was walking on the winter day and i saw a man, his a poor guy because he doesn't have a family. he didn't know about his life. so, the girl was walking behind me and he knew the man. the girl was asked the man.


she asked, "Hi, My name is Carla, what about you what is your name?"


"My name is Mark." replied the man.


so the girl was said about his family. i know your parents your mother name was Christelle and your father name was Christopher. your mother said to me, if you can come to their house, so you can meet them.


Then, the man is going, when he was knocking the door the mother opened the door


Mother said, "Mark, my son?"


Mark replied, "Who are you?"


A mother was crying because she thinks his son can remember him...... I was gonna tell him that he was adapted. mother said while she was crying. and then Mark was ran away while he was crying. he said, i don't think the girl was saying the truth. The girl was walking behind to Mark, and 


"the girl said, "hey mark, why you run away to your parents?"


mark replied, "Because that was not my parents."


Mark yelled, you lied to me you know if your not a girl, maybe i punch you right now. the girl was sad. she said, that is your parents, I am not lying i don't know how to lie. Then, if that's my parent, where she is when a kid, where she is if a need money, where she is if i need help, Mark said.


The girl was nothing to say because Christelle told Carla he can't say anything. Now, Mark was always crying when he saw the street he thinks, is this the street that what i'm looking for? he was gonna try to find his real mom. Finally, he found his real mom, 


a mom said, "Son, Mark?"


mark said while he was crying, "Mom?"


he cry and cry and cry........... and then they hug to each other.




                              THE END......

1 comment:

  1. Great story, your punctuation is good but there are some words in there that don't belong there.

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