My parents are gone on a trip and they left me at home alone. Party time ! Everyone's invited and it will be crazy ! My parents are phoning at 8 and checking on me, that means lies are going to be bouncing off the walls. I am spending the night getting everything ready for the party, i look at the clock and it is 7:58. my parents will be calling me any minute. The phone rings and i calmly answer it.
"Hello?"
"Hi Allie, how is everything at home?" my mom asked.
"Oh great. How is your trip?" I replied as calmly as i could.
" That's good. It is good. Nice to be away. What are your plans for the night?" My mom asked.
"Not much. Just going to watch a few movies and go in the hot tub" I answered slowly.
"Okay. Have fun. We will call you later tomorrow !" My mom said nicely
" Okay, bye!" I replied excitedly. Finally I could relax a bit . Hopefully i was awake the next morning when they phoned. I heard my phone go off in the kitchen and walked towards it to read the message. It was from Lauren saying she could come tonight and that she was so excited. She was going to be here in 15 minutes so we could get ready before everyone got here at 11.
5 hours later
" Hey!" I yelled loudly to my friend Nicole as she walked in the door of my loud, full house. I had only invited a few people but there were so many people here now ! The music was playing loudly out of the stereo and people were shouting and throwing things across the house. This was not what I had imagained it to be like. It was 1:30 in the morning and i am ready to go to sleep. My parents are going to be furious if they find out i had this party ! I wanted everyone out now. I pushed my way through people towards the stereo and shut off the music. People were groaning and yelling things but I ignored them and started to yell.
" Everyone, go home now !" I yelled loudly so everyone could hear.
There were a few angry faces in the crowd as they shuffled outside to their vehicles, but most people understood. A few of my friends were going to stay the night after so they stayed behind.
"The house is trashed !" Johanna excalimed.
"I know it is. We are going to have to clean it up in the morning. I just want to go to sleep now." I replied while yawning.
It was 3:00 in the morning before we all got to go to bed. We were so exhausted and fell asleep instantly.
We woke up in the morning and quickly got ready. We started to clean up the house and managed to get it done in an hour, right as my parents phoned. They said they were coming home early. They would be home at 4 this afternoon. Perfect timing !
Good story. You have a couple mistakes.This Paragraph should have a comma after tub. "Not much. Just going to watch a few movies and go in the hot tub" I answered slowly. Some of your I's are lowercase and should be capitals.
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