My parents just left on a weekend long vacation, leaving me at home alone. I am really wanting to have a party, but I know that my parents wouldn't want me to have one. I decided to have my best friend Sophie over to see what she thinks about it.
Sophie lives just down the block from me so it didn't take long for her to make it to my house. Once Sophie was settled in.
I asked her," Do you think it would be a good idea to have a party since my parents are away for the weekend?"
" I think that would be a good idea, but how many people would you invite?"Sophie answered.
"I don't think I would invite that many people," I said,"maybe twenty or thirty."
Sophie replied," I think that would be a good idea."
So Sophie and I grabbed our phones and started texting some of our other friends. We texted about twenty people. All of them replied and said that they could come.
People started showing up at my house ten minutes later. I didn't think they would be coming that early but we just went along with it. There was some pop and chips down stairs that we brought up for people to have.
Within ten minutes there were over fifty people in our house. Sophie and I didn't even know half of them. Twenty minutes later another fifty or so people showed up. I didn't think I knew any of them, but we were all having a good time.
After a couple of hours things started to get crazy. People were spilling there drinks, dropping chips and there were a couple fights that broke out. From that point on Sophie and I had no control over anybody anymore.
Great story Kaylin! I didn't see any punctuation mistakes, so good job on that.
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